Yesterday went to the genting highland strawberry garden,It's so fresh and beautiful surrounding at there...Hope i can live at there~:P
I picked a lots of strawberry,coz want share some to jia en....Tomorrow is the first day we come out to meet,feel so embarrassing and excited also,got 2 feeling of my mind and soul!Haiz,what i'm thinking?
And i brought a little things to her,myself also have 1 same as her...Dunno wat should i write now,feel so tired coz yesterday i slept at midnight 1.00a.m ....><
Later gonna go tuition,need to take a rest first...Goodbye!
Hopefully 2 morrow is a nice sweet day,God Bless Me!:D
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Erm... Hi there, you had made some mistake in your blog post, hopefully the correction that I done for you will help you for your further blog post. =)
1)I'm(我是)hope I can -> I(我)hope I can
2)I was picked(你這樣寫，會變成摘了又摘)-> I picked
3)want lend(借）some to -> want share some to
4)what I'm though(難)-> what I'm thinking
5)i brought(帶)a little -> i bought(買)a little
6)coz yesterday midnight 1.00a.m just slept -> coz yesterday I slept at midnight 1.00a.m (如果你還要繼續用slept這個字)
7)Hope 2 morrow -> Hopefully 2 morrow (會更好聽)
All the best !
Thanks you so much!Can Improve my english !:D
can u tell me who are u?=)
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